The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the booming of online shopping will lead to the closure of all urban shops in

future

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the future

.I totally disagree with

this

statement and think that shops will always have its place in our economy as people pursue an interest for shopping certain things directly from outlets.

First

of all

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I believe that direct shopping gives people a sense of

fulfillment

a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

fulfilment

that no online sites can give.With online sites there can be trust issues.

On the other hand

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while purchasing directly issues of quality

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colour

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brand

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size and all can be ruled out to a vast extent.

For example

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while buying clothes from shops we can trial it before we buy

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so that we will get to know if it fits perfectly or whether the colour is good

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for

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which cannot be assured through online shopping.

Thus purchasing

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Thus, purchasing

directly from shops

gives

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give

a feeling of satisfaction.

Secondly

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For the products which we need daily

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adjacent shops are the best source.Because online shopping takes some time and there might be delivery charges as well.

sometimes

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Sometimes

the service charges will be more than the product value while buying some less-valued items.

Also there

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Also, there

will be a minimum amount to be purchased in each transaction which is not possible to do daily.

For instance

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to buy milk or vegetables it is easier to go to

nearby shop

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a nearby shop

than

doing

the act that results in something coming to be

making

online purchase

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online purchases

an online purchase

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Shoe

shops are the only reliable source for urgently needed items. To conclude

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I strongly believe that shops will always be there in

future

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the future

as it gives satisfaction to

people

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the people

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timely availability

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customer care service and

customisations

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

250 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
augmented reality
showrooms
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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