The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the booming of online shopping will lead to the closure of all urban shops in
future
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the future
.I totally disagree with
this
statement and think that shops will always have its place in our economy as people pursue an interest for shopping certain things directly from outlets.
First
of all
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I believe that direct shopping gives people a sense of
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
that no online sites can give.With online sites there can be trust issues.
On the other hand
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while purchasing directly issues of quality
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colour
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brand
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size and all can be ruled out to a vast extent.
For example
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while buying clothes from shops we can trial it before we buy
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so that we will get to know if it fits perfectly or whether the colour is good
on
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for
to
us
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which cannot be assured through online shopping.
Thus purchasing
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Thus, purchasing
directly from shops
gives
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give
a feeling of satisfaction.
Secondly
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For the products which we need daily
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adjacent shops are the best source.Because online shopping takes some time and there might be delivery charges as well.
sometimes
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Sometimes
the service charges will be more than the product value while buying some less-valued items.
Also there
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Also, there
will be a minimum amount to be purchased in each transaction which is not possible to do daily.
For instance
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to buy milk or vegetables it is easier to go to
nearby shop
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a nearby shop
than
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
online purchase
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online purchases
an online purchase
.
So
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Shoe
shops are the only reliable source for urgently needed items. To conclude
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I strongly believe that shops will always be there in
future
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the future
as it gives satisfaction to
people
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the people
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timely availability
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customer care service and
customisations
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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