Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

Over a couple of decades, change in climate became a serious issue. In my opinion,
this
is because of extensive
usage
of fossil fuels for the daily needs. Pros of
usage
, As of now, most of the industries are dependent on them. Sudden stop of using them, may lead to closure of those companies. In
this
case, it can't be unavoidable.
For
example
, If an industrial machinery is running on coal for energy and the supply was
stopped
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stopped, then
then
either factory should be
shutdown
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shut down
or else need to replace them with machines which runs on alternative source. In either of the
case
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cases
, it incurs
an
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a
huge investment and loss to the company.
Secondly
, Most of our transportation is dependent on oil.
we
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We
don't have the one, which works
on
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in
sunlight.
For instance
, if
power source
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the power source
for them was stopped,
then
all of them will go in vain and create chaos in public. Cons,
Usage
of them create environmental imbalance. Extensive mining for resources, create
an
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a
huge impact on the weather.
This
is because of high deforestation for mines.
For
example
, we need to clear the surface area, in order to dig underground coal, which may create climatic changes in that area.Not only the mentioned one, but
also
pollution with
usage
of them.
For
example
, Air and water from factory emission.
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Extensive
usage
of them, may lead to rise in the global temperature. There are many side effects on
human
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humans
with the gas that are emitted from vehicles.
For
example
, Breathing problems like Asthma, is one of them. In
this
case, Solar and wind energy, is the best alternative
for
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to
the problem. In conclusion, I support the
usage
of wind and solar power, by slowly reducing the
usage
of Oil
,
Accept space
,
gas
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
and increasing by
usage
of the other sources.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy sources
  • economic collapse
  • fossil fuels
  • solar power
  • wind energy
  • alternative resources
  • clean energy
  • technological advancements
  • government subsidies
  • energy transition
  • reliability
  • job creation
  • economic benefits
  • global warming
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • innovation
  • infrastructure
  • regulatory framework
  • energy efficiency
  • climate resilience
  • decarbonization
  • socioeconomic impact
  • energy security
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