Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

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couple of decades, climate change
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the problem
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the burning
of the fossil fuel. We discuss in detail, in the later part. Coming
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the usage
of Coal. They are the primary
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of power to the industries. In
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case replacement of them, may not be an easier process.
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on it and need to replace them if we are going to stop the usage, which is highly impossible. Regarding the gas, Most of the families, across the globe,
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their cooking. Shifting from it may not be possible.
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for cooking, but replacement material can't be provided
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all of them. Let's see the alternative for the above.
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, Wind Power, The
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of energy is air and mountains or hilly area's are rich in that.
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in those places,
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amount of power generated not only sufficient for household but
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, in high temperature areas. For a sample, if we are going to invest in India, which is rich in
sun light
the rays of the sun
sunlight
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it can
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put in effect
fulfil
the energy requirement for daily need and to most of the factories. In Conclusion, Each has
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of energy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy sources
  • economic collapse
  • fossil fuels
  • solar power
  • wind energy
  • alternative resources
  • clean energy
  • technological advancements
  • government subsidies
  • energy transition
  • reliability
  • job creation
  • economic benefits
  • global warming
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • innovation
  • infrastructure
  • regulatory framework
  • energy efficiency
  • climate resilience
  • decarbonization
  • socioeconomic impact
  • energy security
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