Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A variety of opinions
which when
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which, when
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
,
sometimes gives
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sometimes give
very interesting conclusions. Of them two perceptions that
makes
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make
up a list
for
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of
huge debates are about the necessary subjects to be taught in school, which are the subjects of history and
science
and technology, and that
both
entirely different subjects.
Analyzing
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Analysing
both
subjects will be crucial for reaching any single point of mutual acceptance. History, as its’ name suggests
that is
a
study
of the past, which seemingly gives a feel of being not so important to
study
as a subject is actually a very vast field. People who believe that it should be an important subject gives a very logical answer that these advancements are due to the researches done is remote past and when all these developments were made and any
unfortune
not favored by fortune; marked or accompanied by or resulting in ill fortune
unfortunate
occurs in
process
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the process
of
progress
, it is historians that
takes
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take
the developers in
past
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the past
to learn from their mistakes and to rectify the problem. Apart from the developments we get to know about our past more importantly from where we can judge and correct ourselves from going into much disaster.
Science
and technology, as the name suggests
that is
the
study
of the phenomenon of the nature and its use to ease the lives of people. Many a people think that its
study
is much more important
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
any other subject of arts and it is
totally independent field
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a totally independent field
. With the following statement, a variety of explanations we get are that it is the
science
that let the human
progress
at
such
a faster rate than ever before, it has help creating too many advancements and technologies to ease up the lives.
Science
, in its basic not only
prosper but
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prosper, but
gave a much boost to the
progress
. To connect the history with the
science
needs to be explained from a research that when studies were not as formal today and everything was on a story telling model, that was transferred from generations to generations
unto
up to, before the time
until
the point came when a need to write and save it for future use. Here, comes the work of historians to dig out what was before a mystery.
Therefore
, it will not be wrong to say that
both
subjects are important. Though, at some
places
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place's
history makes up to the line and some places it is the
science but
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science, but
it will be very wrong to separate these two subjects. In my opinion, keeping
both
at a race will be the key to more
progress
and success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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