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What do you see as the main reasons for gender inequality in the workplace?

#gender #inequality #workplace
In various sectors, inequality between working men and women is a well-known fact.
Theoretically all
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Theoretically, all
 employers agree that women and men are
equal
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equal, although
although
 in practice they avoid to behave on
this
 base. Women face unequal pay, sexual harassment, less promotion, fear of asking to be paid what they’re worth in their workplaces.
First
 of all, it’s a well-known fact that
mostly
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most
 women be paid less than man in
same position
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the same position
 even though there isn’t any performance discrepancy. Women surpass men about
education
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education, however
however
 women are not asking the salary that they are worth it by reason of not to be seemed as a greedy or desperate, yet men have no fear like
this
.
Secondly
, women promoted less than men and to justify
this
employers
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employer
 assert invalid reasons like parental leave not loudly but in deep. Another basic
however
 true reason is
stereotypes
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stereotyped
 in
employers
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employer
 mindset.
As a result
, to help curb inequality in the workplaces, all people
be
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are
 aware of
main reasons
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the main reasons
 and take a stand against these kind of unfairness.
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