It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be before. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be bought together.
A happy family life is
one
of the life's greatest blessings and its absence is a misfortuneUse synonyms
.
The people are engaged in getting more and they cannot manage to spend time with their loved ones.
Now a days, even sitting together and eating a meal is not possible in every familyAccept space
.
.
The parents are engaged in their own Accept space
.
work
, the children are busy with their studies and the mothers with the household things. It is not even seen that a family Use synonyms
atleast
eat Suggestion
at least
one
meal of the day togetherUse synonyms
.
There are lots of many other reasons why the families are mot close in today's growing world. The father might be working in Accept space
.
other
country for better pay or some other valid reasons. The students went any of various alternatives; some other
another
aborod
for to or in a foreign country
abroad
better higher
Accept comma addition
better, higher
education even
the mother Accept comma addition
education, even
are
now Suggestion
is
pefer
nuclear family because she may cannot handle the pressure to manage the joint family.
Still, if family members are not in earlier in time; previously
before
one
city they are somewhere connected through different medium of Use synonyms
technolgy
or they meet during the the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
vactions
or some leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure
vacations
vacation
familuy
functions. But still the emotional and physical touch is missing some or the other as it used to be beforea social unit living together
family
.
Where the father's come home from the Accept space
.
work
and Use synonyms
then
all the family members eat together at the dinner table and talk about their entire day and Linking Words
this
is the way they live and share Linking Words
there
happiness around.
Most of us of them or themselves
their
soend
our evening time at homepass time in a specific way
spend
,
but are we spending it with our loved ones? No, we are busy with our private Accept space
,
work
and space. Family can be happy when we will Use synonyms
kem
them into our not agitated; without losing self-possession
calm
first
prioritiesLinking Words
.
The parents means 'love'
Accept space
.
and
for that Suggestion
And
one
Use synonyms
sholud
communicate expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
in
the family. "Suggestion
with
communication
is the major key to bring happiness". Even following our culture and tradition can bring our families together. If they are not in Suggestion
Communication
one
place still they should appreciate each other's Use synonyms
work
and should be there for others's worst conditions and breakthrough.
Use synonyms
Thus
Linking Words
,
to sum up Accept space
,
one
should develop the strong bond by Use synonyms
priotizing
the schedule so that it helps to retain blood-relation strong and for a customary way of operation or behavior
practicing
practising
long time
.Suggestion
a long time
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