These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Modern world today
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going abroad for better job and life is quite common.The argument that Accept space
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this
migration might be harmful for the child
in the family is a subject that is
both supported and refuted many.In my opinion I
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child
's problem related to settling in a new place would be temporary that can be effectively managed.
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,
some argue that when Accept space
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move to a new a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
country
which would be negatively impacts
on younger one in the family.Suggestion
impacted
In other words
, relocating can be painfull
since they required to leave their friends and family members and when they reach causing physical or psychological pain
painful
new atmosphere
they would find difficulty in adjusting with it.Suggestion
the new atmosphere
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culture
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this
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according
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thus
problems related to moving to another country
is obvious.
However
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others believe that difficulties related to migrating another Accept space
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country
for children can be minimal instead
it brings more advantageous to the child
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able
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ability
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productive, which
lived his native
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lived in his native
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thing to happen to any
child
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feel that when a child
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country
for the sake children future.
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I support migration as it has many benefits to the Accept space
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