Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

To reduce traffic congestion, there are two opposite ideas. Some people think government should spend money on building
train
and subway lines and the another is
suggest
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suggesting
that building more and wider roads.
Although
both of two ways have its own benefits, I believe that the
first
ideas would offer more advantages. With the
second
ideas, building more and wider roads is a good option but not be the better. Even though it will bring us some benefits
such
as more lines
for
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of
vehicals
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
, reduce the colliding of cars, the traffic system could be more details and easier to handle,…, it
also take
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also takes
has also taken
us to some terrible problems. We will have to move to
Apartment
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the Apartment
or some buildings which be built for people to live together so as to give more lands for them to open roads. For that reason, it will cost a lot of money to construct and not sure that all residents to move. So I think it is too hard to make
this
idea real.
On the other hand
, it
seem
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seems
to me that building
train
and subway lines is
better choice
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a better choice
the better choice
.
Firstly
, it won’t take any quarter meters of lands because subway lines
is built
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are built
under the
earth so
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earth, so
we
don’t have go
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do not go
don’t go
didn’t go
did not go
haven’t gone
have not gone
are not going
to any places.
Secondly
, moving by metro and
train
is faster and more convenient. As it just takes ten or fifteen minutes
to
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of
moving a big distance, people or
stundents
a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
who live far from their work and school can go to their place easily.
Thirdly
, using public transport not only reduce traffic
congestion but
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congestion, but
also
pollution air
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pollution, air
because the metro and the modern are used by electrics. While having benefits like that, there something that we must notice.
For example
, we ought to arrange our
time so
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time, so
suitably in order to not be late for our turn of
train
and metro. In conclusion, two ways all will cost a huge money to build but I have a strong belief in the
first
way. The advantages of it will be better and easier to build and make it real.
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