Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

To reduce traffic congestion, there are two opposite ideas. Some people think government should spend money on building

train

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and subway lines and the another is

suggest

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suggesting

that building more and wider roads.

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both of two ways have its own benefits, I believe that the

first

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ideas would offer more advantages. With the

second

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ideas, building more and wider roads is a good option but not be the better. Even though it will bring us some benefits

such

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as more lines

for

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of

vehicals

a conveyance that transports people or objects

vehicles

, reduce the colliding of cars, the traffic system could be more details and easier to handle,…, it

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also take

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also takes

has also taken

us to some terrible problems. We will have to move to

Apartment

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the Apartment

or some buildings which be built for people to live together so as to give more lands for them to open roads. For that reason, it will cost a lot of money to construct and not sure that all residents to move. So I think it is too hard to make

this

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idea real.

On the other hand

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, it

seem

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seems

to me that building

train

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and subway lines is

better choice

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a better choice

the better choice

.

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, it won’t take any quarter meters of lands because subway lines

is built

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are built

under the

earth so

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earth, so

we

don’t have go

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do not go

don’t go

didn’t go

did not go

haven’t gone

have not gone

are not going

to any places.

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, moving by metro and

train

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is faster and more convenient. As it just takes ten or fifteen minutes

to

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of

moving a big distance, people or

stundents

a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution

students

who live far from their work and school can go to their place easily.

Thirdly

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, using public transport not only reduce traffic

congestion but

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congestion, but

also

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pollution air

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pollution, air

because the metro and the modern are used by electrics. While having benefits like that, there something that we must notice.

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, we ought to arrange our

time so

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time, so

suitably in order to not be late for our turn of

train

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and metro. In conclusion, two ways all will cost a huge money to build but I have a strong belief in the

first

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way. The advantages of it will be better and easier to build and make it real.