Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To reduce traffic congestion, there are two opposite ideas. Some people think government should spend money on building
train
and subway lines and the another is suggest
that building more and wider roads. Suggestion
suggesting
Although
both of two ways have its own benefits, I believe that the first
ideas would offer more advantages.
With the second
ideas, building more and wider roads is a good option but not be the better. Even though it will bring us some benefits such
as more lines for
Suggestion
of
vehicals
, reduce the colliding of cars, the traffic system could be more details and easier to handle,…, it a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
also take
us to some terrible problems. We will have to move to Suggestion
also takes
has also taken
Apartment
or some buildings which be built for people to live together so as to give more lands for them to open roads. For that reason, it will cost a lot of money to construct and not sure that all residents to move. So I think it is too hard to make Suggestion
the Apartment
this
idea real.
On the other hand
, it seem
to me that building Suggestion
seems
train
and subway lines is better choice
. Suggestion
a better choice
the better choice
Firstly
, it won’t take any quarter meters of lands because subway lines is built
under the Suggestion
are built
earth so
we Accept comma addition
earth, so
don’t have go
to any places. Suggestion
do not go
don’t go
didn’t go
did not go
haven’t gone
have not gone
are not going
Secondly
, moving by metro and train
is faster and more convenient. As it just takes ten or fifteen minutes to
moving a big distance, people or Suggestion
of
stundents
who live far from their work and school can go to their place easily. a learner who is enrolled in an educational institution
students
Thirdly
, using public transport not only reduce traffic congestion but
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congestion, but
also
pollution air
because the metro and the modern are used by electrics. While having benefits like that, there something that we must notice. Accept comma addition
pollution, air
For example
, we ought to arrange our time so
suitably in order to not be late for our turn of Accept comma addition
time, so
train
and metro.
In conclusion, two ways all will cost a huge money to build but I have a strong belief in the first
way. The advantages of it will be better and easier to build and make it real.Submitted by Thanh
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