Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

it
Suggestion
It
is a common practice for rational minds and business concerns to chemically preserve
food
. In my opinion, the drawbacks of
this
practice in terms of the
health
hazards
outstrips
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outstrip
any benefits it might have. ------- Admittedly, people indulge in the habit of using chemicals on
food
in order to increase the life span for pure economic gains.
This
act is not uncommon with perishable goods.
In other words
, businesses will have enough time to sell their products and recoup their investment before the goods eventually expires.
Consequently
, small and medium scale
food
vendors will thrive, reduce loses and continually
remein
stay the same; remain in a certain state
remain
remains
remind
a going concern in the industry.
For instance
, Mr Biggs in a bid to ensure the longevity of her bread recently added
preservatives
in the production process.
This
act
immidiately
without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening
immediately
paid off as there was an upsurge in the number of bread sold. --------
Nevertheless
, the method of ensuring the preservation of
food
using chemical poses serious
health
issues to consumers. Some of these
preservatives
are poisonous to the body and causes serious
health
collapse. It has been reported that cancerous cells live and multiply in
food
sustained with
preservatives
that are nearing expiration.
For example
, National Agency for
Food
and Drugs Administration and Control in Nigeria advised the populace to desist from consuming
food
with
preservatives
and embrace a more healthy and balanced
diet
Accept comma addition
diet, such
such
as vegetables and fruits, which provides the body with essential vitamins and minerals.
Therefore
, consuming
food
with chemical
preservatives
increases
ones
Suggestion
one's
chances of having
health
related challenges. -----------In conclusion, the benefits of increasing the life span of
food
using chemical in terms of economic gains cannot be compared to the numerous
health
challenges therein.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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