Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

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There is a recent outcry
of
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about
the dangers posed by the increasing
use
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of various chemicals both in the production and preservation of foods we consume. In my opinion, while there are few benefits in its
use
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, the alarming rate of its side effects outweighs any possible benefits. Admittedly, the
use
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of chemical as
ripening agent
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a ripening agent
as helped cut-short the long
awaiting
the act of waiting (remaining inactive in one place while expecting something)
waiting
period in the growth of some agricultural products. Plantain is a good example, farmers now harvest plantain in just four months rather than the usual twelve months.
In addition
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, the
use
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of chemical
preservatives
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for
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of
most canned foods has allowed
producing
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to produce
companies to export food product to distant locations without the fear of it getting
rottened
go or come back to place, condition, or activity where one has been before
returned
rationed
before reaching the consumer. Another angle to look into
is
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being
its ripple economical benefits from exportation of preserved food products.
Nevertheless
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,
chemically induced ripening agent
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a chemically induced ripening agent
has done more harm than good to our agricultural produce.
Although
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, they tend to have a spontaneous
growth but
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growth, but
they fail to stand the test of time and
also
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its natural benefits would have been compromised. A recent report from the International Institute of Tropical Agriculture
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IITA) at Ibadan concluded that agricultural produce induced by
ripening agent
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a ripening agent
tend to get spoilt post harvest earlier than those that were not induced. The
research
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researchers
placed plantain followed by banana and other species of vegetables as the most affected ones. A laboratory analysis from the research
also
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showed that products from
preservatives
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had a lesser percentage of some essential elements. Low Iron and potassium contents in vegetables and
plantain
the act of fixing firmly in place
planting
respectively. Another issue with chemical
preservatives
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is its hazardous effects on human health. Cancer, the world leading cause of premature death, has been attributed to the excessive consumption of
preservatives
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. W.H.O has posited that banning of artificial
preservatives
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could help reduce the prevalence of cancer and other related disease conditions in the society. In conclusion, some
economical
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economic
benefits might have been attributed to chemical
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preservatives but
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preservatives, but
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
numerous drawbacks among which are detrimental to human health outweighs any benefits it might pose.
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