Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

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Sequel to the necessity to attend to several issues of life at home, people are increasing resolving to chemicals to preserve
food
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even in the
production
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of
food
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as well. In my opinion, there are some benefits derivable from
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. It's demerits
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as its effect on our
body
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system
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and the lack of essential taste it brings to our tongues are major negative aspects to consider. Admittedly, the use of chemicals guarantees required durability expected from
food
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ingredients.
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, it makes stock level of
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at home to
last
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long as expected in as much as they are well applied
on
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to
supplements.
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is because families these
days usually
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days, usually
take a sizable quantity of raw
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at home to
last
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the family for a while owing to frequent busy schedules of life and prevention of daily
visitation
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visits
to markets and shopping malls.
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, the recent survey carried out by the Cereal Research Institute of Nigeria (CRIN) revealed that the
silos
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silo
project embarked upon by the Federal Government of Nigeria revealed that there has been significant improvement in the application of chemical on
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production
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by more than 60% in 2019 as compared to 2018.
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has tremendously enhanced
food
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preservation with desired durability for
usage
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use
in
food
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production
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at factories.
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, usage of chemicals
on
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in
foods enormously ensure the availability of the desired edible foods for man most especially when the are out of their seasons. Availability of mangoes, corns and maize during
dry season
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the dry season
in Nigeria is a good example.
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is an indication of effective application of
chemicals them
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chemicals in them
. Another positive aspect is that, preservation prevents
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from frequent insects and
fungi
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fungus
diseases thereby
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diseases, thereby
preventing quick decay of
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supplements consumed daily.
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, a major drawback of continuous consumption of preserved
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is the rate at which human
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system
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is liable to infirmity and other health related diseases. Reason being that, most inorganic foods are not good to our
body
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system
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because they are mostly processed from one stage of
production
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to the other. Taking
indomie
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and spaghetti
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, they are products of combination of factory
food
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production
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processes with chemicals to sustain its durability. Excess consumption of them will definitely lead to cancer in the long runs.
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,
food
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preservation makes
food
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to lack essential taste and nutrients required to supply the
body
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.
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is because when raw foods are over preserved to prevent them from diseases, there is
high chance
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a high chance
to
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
taste.
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will
consequently
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not give the
body
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the required vitamins and nutrients.
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Other
dangers of the use of chemicals
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in
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is
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are
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encourages farming indolence and laziness.
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, it gives room for availability of inorganic
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every where
to or in any or all places
everywhere
because
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trend discourages real farming.
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will definitely result to ageing decrease because of the absence of organic
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from farming. In conclusion, while part of the benefits derived from the usage of chemicals include sustainability of
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ingredients for a long time, it's numerous drawbacks among which is majorly it's effect on our
body
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system
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is one
that is
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incomparable to any merit it might have.
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