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The army sector has seen an increasing number of women

enrollments

the act of enrolling

enrolments

enrolments'

enrolment's

in the past two or three decades.

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Women

have showed

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have shown

their mettle in

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field. Some individuals are

skeptical

denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion

sceptical

about women being fit for

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jobs. They believe that only men should pursue

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careers.

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, I tend to disagree and would

put

put into a certain place or abstract location

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my arguments to support my views in the upcoming paragraphs. My

first

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argument is that nowadays we are heading towards an egalitarian society, in which all should have

equal

having the same quantity, value, or measure as another

Equal

rights'

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, women should have the same right as men to choose their profession.

people

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People

should be chosen for jobs based on

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the

their

skills, qualification and character. So if a woman has enough ability to join the forces, she should be welcome to become a soldier in the army, or join other

defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

services. Gender should not come in the way of the selection process. There is a group of people who claim that women lack physical

strength

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, and

therefore

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they are not fit to be in the army,

naw

in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events

now

or the air force, as these jobs require physical

strength

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. I

would

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would, however

however

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, argue that it would be wrong to say that women are less able than men in certain jobs.

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In

On

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fact, women may be better at controlling a situation by communicating more effectively. Many areas in the

defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

require more than just physical

strength

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. Teamwork, leadership and communication may be just as important.

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, it could be argued that even physical

strength

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can be increased by effective workouts and muscle

traininS'

activity leading to skilled behavior

training

Women who join

such

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jobs do undergo rigorous training and are no less than men when they are on the job. Choosing a career is

also

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a matter of personal choice. More and more men are now entering fields

such

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as nursing and teaching, which were earlier thought to be a woman's domain. So, it should come as no surprise if women choose to enter the

defense

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

jobs. Summing up, women should have the same role as men in the armed forces.

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is the need of the times.