In many countries today, people can buy a wide rage of household goods (TV, microwave oven, and rice cooker). Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years, due to the rapid development of new technologies, people from not only developed countries but
also
developing countries can purchase a variety of
household
appliances,
such
as
air
conditioning,
wash
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washer
washing
machine, toaster and so forth.
Although
whether appearing so many
household
goods is positive development or not is a matter of some dispute, I side with the view that these
household
commodities are beneficial to our lives.
TV
,
air
conditioning and
rice
cooker have become three indispensable goods in every
families
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family
.
TV
has been entered into families for a long period.
TV
programmes spread both educational and entertainment plots everyday and
everytime
for people to enjoy.
In other words
, rich and colourful
TV
programmes can enrich children’s extracurricular knowledge and alleviate people’s stress. As
to
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for
air
conditioning, it as temperature conditioner plays an important role.
For instance
, when extremely low or high temperature arrives,
air
conditioning will release a large amount of cool
air
or hot gas which makes the temperature of
room
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the room
a room
more comfortable. According to the latest survey, there are plenty of people died in the
excessive
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excessively
hot weather because of the intensification of global warming, while with the help of
air
conditioning, the number of deaths is declining. As well as those two applicants,
rice
cooker can be used to enhance efficiency for people to a certain degree, especially for workers. People can use
rice cooker
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a rice cooker
with timing function cooking
rice
in advance and
then
having hot meals after work, which saves much time and easy to use.
However
, some disadvantages of
household
goods cannot be ignored. A large quantity of
TV
and computer are widespread used, as far as radiation of them is concerned, scientific evidence has shown that radiation that a working
TV
or
computer produces
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a computer produces
has the potential to cause brain cancer.
In addition
, there are more generalized environmental problems caused by the power production of
air
conditioning.
Becaused
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Because
a large percentage of electricity is created by coal-burning power plants,
air
conditioning contributes indirectly to the release of greenhouse gases and other pollution. It cannot be denied that the development of
household
goods may have some drawbacks.
However
, taking all factors into account, its advantages carry more water. From my point of view, the use of
household
appliances should be advocated and encouraged.
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