You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Writ a letter to the manager of the hotel in your letter Give details of what was wrong Explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time Say what action you would like the manager to take

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Hi Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention about the cooling system in the hotel. I am staying in your hotel from yesterday in room no

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201. I visited your official website and had a virtual tour of the facilities and infrastructure as it was

pleasant experience

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a pleasant experience

and unique. Curiously checked for the reviews and ratings about the hospitality service. Based on the positive comments booked a room for myself and

kid

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the kid

. We checked in at 5PM, the ambience and service are splendid. In the late evening the temperature is not adjusted as per weather conditions. It was freezing. In spite of

summer

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the summer

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we felt like winter season. On

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the other hand, we

the other hand we

were in shortage of warm clothes. Blankets provided were not sufficient.

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called to the reception to report the problem and they ensured to resolve it soon it didn’t happen. We slept

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the sofa as the place is not so cold. I urge the management to investigate the issue quickly in order to provide best amenity. The problem may be due to the leakage in the outlet socket. I await your prompt service. Yours Faithfully,

Sankari

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Fri Aug 09 2019

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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