You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: • state your reason for writing • describe the problems and explain how you feel • propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action
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Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I am one of your tenants at 27 Bradford street and writing to you to inform Change the punctuation
Mr
about
the burnt control panel of the heater. The workmen Correct pronoun usage
you about
Mr.
Jay holds electrical fluctuations in supply for Change the punctuation
Mr
this
fault. The same cause has damaged one of my flatmate’s laptop charger
as well.
Now that the winter has started it is becoming difficult to sleep at night.
The other problem is that the fishes in the tank seem to be falling sick because of Fix the agreement mistake
chargers
this
irregularity in temperature. My flatmates and I are extremely discomfortable due to this
condition.
I propose you to
get the control unit replaced as early as you could.
Mark, my flatmate, suggests Fix the infinitive
apply
to add
a stabiliser at our electrical mains so as to permanently eradicate the fluctuation issue. We have shifted the tank at a friend’s place and we three are on an excursion till Sunday. It would be great if you can get Change the verb form
adding
this
done before we return. Thanking you in advance.
Yours Sincerely,
James MarkoSubmitted by Jigar on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite