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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family
for six months and look after their six- year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
- Explain why you would like the job
- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear sir and Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to the response of advert you have given in an Oppo Magazine for the need of
guardian
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 to your toddler son.
Moreover
, I will get a chance to have an experience of living with
Australian
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an Australian
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 Family. I am here in Australia for
internship
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an internship
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 in Prime Technical Solution for eight months. Back in India, I live in joined
Punjabi
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the Punjabi
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 family with three children of my brother. They are
also
 of
a
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 same age, and they love my company because of my friendly nature. So, I would like to have the same surrounding here in the working country. My job in Australia going to be telecommuting, which means
my
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most of
time
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the time
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 going to be in front of
computer
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the computer
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 working from home, there would be
an
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only two visits to the office in a week. My work profile made me an ideal candidate for the job, as I can keep a good eye on your kid.
Lastly
, I would like to visit the best malls of Sydney and photograph the
day
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 chaos of the street of
city
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the city
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. I have a great interest in photography and would like to
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pursue
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purse
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 it as
profession
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a profession
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 in near future. I hope mentioned above request
worth
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 considering. Yours faithfully John Wick
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • advertisement
  • live with
  • look after
  • six-year-old child
  • suitable
  • employ
  • free time
  • Australia
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