The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.
The line graph compares the number of
goods
sent to the UK
by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million
of Correct your spelling
millions
tonnes
.
Overall
, it is evident that the figures for transporting goods
increased during the given period. Moreover
, transportation via land and water were
primarily used for shipping the Change the verb form
was
goods
to the United Kingdom, while
the pipeline was utilize
the least.
Wrong verb form
utilised
According to
the graph, the quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
goods
being delivered to the UK
via land stood at nearly 70 million tonnes
(MT). This
number started to grow slightly in the succeeding years, hitting almost 100 tonnes
in the final year. Moreover
, delivery via sea was likewise
commonly used to import goods
to the UK
, which delivered just below 40 MG of products in 1974, before it had doubled its number to 60M tonnes
in 2002.
Meanwhile, the least used method for shipping cargos
to the Fix the agreement mistake
cargo
UK
were
via railway and pipeline. The former shipped 40 million Change the verb form
was
tonnes
of goods
in 1974, after which it had minimal fluctuations, before ending at the same figure of 40MT in 2002. Lastly
, use
of Correct article usage
the use
pipeline
Fix the agreement mistake
pipelines
imported
merely below 20MT in 1974 but Add a missing verb
was imported
also
increased steadily to over 20 metric tons in 2002.Submitted by ptds1022 on
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