The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.

The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.
The line graph compares the number of
goods
sent to the
UK
by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in
million
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millions
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of
tonnes
.
Overall
, it is evident that the figures for transporting
goods
increased during the given period.
Moreover
, transportation via land and water
were
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primarily used for shipping the
goods
to the United Kingdom,
while
the pipeline was
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the least.
According to
the graph, the
quantity
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number
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of
goods
being delivered to the
UK
via land stood at nearly 70 million
tonnes
(MT).
This
number started to grow slightly in the succeeding years, hitting almost 100
tonnes
in the final year.
Moreover
, delivery via sea was
likewise
commonly used to import
goods
to the
UK
, which delivered just below 40 MG of products in 1974, before it had doubled its number to 60M
tonnes
in 2002. Meanwhile, the least used method for shipping
cargos
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to the
UK
were
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via railway and pipeline. The former shipped 40 million
tonnes
of
goods
in 1974, after which it had minimal fluctuations, before ending at the same figure of 40MT in 2002.
Lastly
,
use
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the use
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of
pipeline
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pipelines
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imported
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was imported
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merely below 20MT in 1974 but
also
increased steadily to over 20 metric tons in 2002.
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