You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter • advise them of your situation • explain how this is affecting you • request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr Ahmed, I am writing you
this
letter to request a new ID card because I have lost mine
last
Wednesday while I was
in
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the way to the college by
a
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taxi. I have faced many problems because of my lost ID card. The security at the gate of the college refused to get me in,
however
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I showed them my lectures’ timetable and my friends told them that I am a student in the language department.
However
, they did not change the rules.
As a result
, unfortunately, I could not hand
my
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assignment for
phonetics
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class. For sure I lose marks in
this
subject.
In addition
to that, on Thursday night I could not register
on
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the linguistics class, which negatively
effect
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on my
studying
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. I have to wait for the
next
month to apply. I really suggest putting an announcement on the wallboard to advise the other students to take
a
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good care of their ID cards to prevent themselves from several troubles. I am looking forward to
hear
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from you soon.
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sincerely, Heba Mahmoud
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Examples:

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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