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Group activities or team work help in developing life skills do you agree or disagree?Explain

#group #activities #team #work #life #skills
I agree that in developing
life
skills team
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skills, team
work
 help. Team
work
 is the in thing in
corporate world
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the corporate world
 today
,
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in
software
 company
,
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sports and even healthcare sector. In
software
 company it helps as not all can do every
task
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task, for
for
example troubleshooting
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example, troubleshooting
,
software
 testing and
software
 development.Some are experts
in
particular field
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a particular field
the particular field
particular fields
.In sports even in individual sports like tennis
,
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athletics now you need a team of dietician
,
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coach and fitness coach to be competitive.In
healthcare
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health care
 you need the team of nursing staff
,
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hospital manager
,
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physician, cardiologist
,
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surgeon trained in different organ specific surgery to run the hospital. As already stated not everyone is able to do everything
,
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Jack of all.Every human is unique in abilities.Team
work
also
 helps to know how
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 person is thinking
,
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,
knew
not of long duration; having just (or relatively recently) come into being or been made or acquired or discovered
new
 new ideas in dealing with different tasks.
Also
 helps in professional
life
 by sharing problems as well as in personal
life
,
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like working mothers.Helps to know they manage the multitasking of managing home and
work
 simultaneously.Even helps to solve personal issues by discussing amongst each other.
Also
, decrease stress by discussing problems
in
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at
work
.
Also
 makes a person socially responsible by creating sense of how to deal with others
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how to share success
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how to let others have the credit.Let person understand the issues people face in
life
 and
thus
 help in developing lessons for
life
.
This
 should can be done by inculcating habit in children.To have
better society
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a better society
 tomorrow.Making them learn it in school and house.Asking them to share.
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