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In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Governments in some countries have started the moment of motivating industries and businesses to move to locations which are outside the city limits, I believe
this
 is a good idea and has lot more advantages as compared to
disadvantages
Suggestion
the disadvantages
 In areas outside the city limits, there is a plethora of land which is available at cheaper prices,
hence
 the capital cost for companies is far lesser as compared to the city.
Secondly
, for industries like bottling plants, milk-based products, automotive factories, there are far more resources available for their functioning in these areas, not to mention the labour cost which would be cheaper than as compared to the urban areas. From the employment perspective, industries in the rural generate employment for the rural folks, land purchase; leading to
upliftment
Suggestion
the upliftment
 of the standard of living in that particular area over time. There is another side of
this
 coin too, rural folks will generally need training for them to fit roles required by specific industries.
This
 may increase the lead time till the real productivity of that industry starts to show.
Also
, essentials like electricity and connectivity to major cities by road could be a concern during rainy seasons due to the area being off the grid in nature. Cities are generally the highest consumer of resources which are manufactured outside it, so essentially the industry will be far away from its major clients. In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of
this
 trend outweigh the disadvantages? In essence there are challenges while setting up industries outside big cities, but the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages and
hence
 I think governments should continue to promote
this
 idea with aplomb
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional areas
  • big cities
  • encouraging
  • industries
  • businesses
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • economic growth
  • overcrowding
  • traffic congestion
  • employment opportunities
  • balanced regional development
  • preservation of natural resources
  • quality of life
  • cultural diversity
  • lack of infrastructure
  • amenities
  • skilled workers
  • impact on the environment
  • decline in the economy
  • social and cultural challenges
  • integrating
  • new industries
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