Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#traffic #cities #companies #factories #employees #countryside

Increased traffic and

realestate

Suggestion

real estate

availability, is a growing concern in many metropolitan cities. In order to solve

this

issue, some people

blieve

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believed

believes

that major companies should be moved to the countryside. In my

opinion

Accept comma addition

opinion, this

this

is a good idea which has many positive aspects. In the

last

decade, the amount of people living in metropolitan cities is increasing rapidly.

This

has created an imbalance between the amount of residents, and the availability of houses, as well as major transportation issues.

Furthermore

, in most of the cities, like London and New York, the amount of new housing projects

are decreasing

Suggestion

is decreasing

, because of lack of free open spaces. In order to address

this

issue,

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

112 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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governments should spend money on railways rather than other roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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