Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods To what extend do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing increasing production is an appropriate goal

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Globalization is a
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, Countries have been always looking for
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improving
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its economy to higher the quality of life of its inhabitants.
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goal
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carries
the important task of
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generating
more materials and goods which enable the
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to exchange them with others and with the citizens too. I agree that the goal of every
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is increasing the production of goods and materials,
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this
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statement is likely if the
government
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encourage
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encourages
people and companies to produce and use them
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responsibly
, it means that a successful economy is determined by how many goods they
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have been able to exchange with
others but
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others, but
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important to be aware
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how they are produced and how their production is impacting the environment, are they increasing the CO2 emissions?, Do the people Know how to dispose in its final use?.
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, those industries have to be
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socially
responsible, and it is
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a
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commitment to ensure that manufacturers hire people from the
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, and help them to achieve professional goals.
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the country
and in my point of view the Colombian
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have to encourage people to create companies which produce useful goods and
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to take advantage of the raw materials we are fortune to have. The
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should be more open to finance and develop policies to promote
industries
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the industries
of different goods.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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