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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Practical skills and theoretical
knowledge
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 are two completely far-off approaches to learning. While theoretical education will help one to get a clear understanding of the fundamental concepts and how a particular mechanism works. But without practical
knowledge
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 one cannot put their efficiency into practical
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. In my opinion, in today’s
job
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 market theoretical
knowledge
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’s importance cannot be entirely overlooked. Formal qualifications help a person learn why and how skills are used and implemented. It is more preferable in today’s
job
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 market as without theoretical
knowledge
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 tasks cannot be performed in a
job
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. The theory is important from a
job
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’s point of view because it gives a deeper insight into a context. In fact, professionals like teachers, lawyers, doctors cannot execute work without formal qualifications and a degree. On the other side, some people disagree as they think practical skills are far more important for a person’s functioning at a professional place. Certain things can only be learned through experience and performance.
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, for a designer or an artist practical skills like creativity and innovative ideas that they gain
with
the vertical force exerted by a mass as a result of gravity
weight
 training is more beneficial that theory.
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, there are many people who were college
drop-outs but
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dropouts, but
dropouts but
dropout but
 presently they are doing wonders in their lives. In the end, theoretical
knowledge
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 and practical skills are interconnected as they complement each other.
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, though practical skills
are given
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give
 more weightage in the
job
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 market these days, formal qualifications should not be denied as it helps make an individual’s future career more prosperous.
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