Small town center shops are running out of business because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?

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conomy
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The economy
of a rural area plays a
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an
important role in the country
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In some small
town
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people tend to go shopping in big c
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city
stores
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instead
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of shopping in their small
town
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an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
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hese plays a major disadvantage by diminishing the business in the rural areas.A
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the disadvantage of less job and income due to these will show
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To begin
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with,
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development and jobs will be affected by the p
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person's
peoples'
peoples
tendency to shop in cities rather than shopping in their own
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alem
a city in northeastern Massachusetts; site of the witchcraft trials in 1692
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sale
rural area of i
ndia
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
found less development and jobs
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s people travel daily to shop in big cities for their basic needs. As there is less interest in local shops
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rural g
overment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
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arn
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earns
less money and suffers to support the school
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road and hospitals.
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creating a poor lifestyle as people suffer for their basic needs.
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, People who travel f
or
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to
big cities may benefit the r
urul
living in or characteristic of farming or country life
rural
town
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by bringing the business to them
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For instance
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Macdonals had opened a small shop in a rural area as they found more customer
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Consequently
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exposure of the potential buyers will lure shops and industry in rural areas and provide jobs and pay taxes to the local government
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Therefore
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, benefiting the rural economy and enhancing it. But in contray
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