Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Sometimes, learning

history

can be boring

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for

the most students and they may interest in studying of

others

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

subjects

such

invention

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the invention

of robots and so on. But, it does not mean that

history

is not essential to our lives and it will still remain as important as

science

. In my point of view, I believe that both subjects are vital and they should still be in the school curriculum. I would like

say

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to say

that

history

is the mirror of our older generation which reflected everything of the past. By studying

history

, we learn about hardship which our previous generation had gone through.

For example

, the time that the fire was made to the time that electricity was invented. Without

history

, we will not be able to know what was

happened

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happening

in that period especially for young kids. Without

history

, they might not be able to know the life without electricity and they

may ended

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may end

up like wasting electricity.

However

science

and technology

also

play as an essential role in our lives. The reason is that they will make

better future

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a better future

for us especially in medical fields.

For example

, getting a surgery with robots, finding different kinds of treatment for cancer are the result of advanced

science

and technology. One of my experiences of advanced in

science

is that people can go appendectomy without

laparotomy

by using laparoscopy. That means, people did not need to open the abdomen to get surgery

instead

a small scope will be

use

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used

usable

useable

to do surgery which can result in less complications and they can go home faster. In my view,

history

is important as well as

science

. And, the reason is

history

can help us to reflect about the lacking of our judgement in order to improve in the future and

science

will bring us to a better future.

Therefore

, I strongly agree that both subjects should remain as a school

subjects

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subject

Tue Aug 27 2019

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduces the ammount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

In modern life, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food and in other products like clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently received an email from your English-speaking friend, Pat, inviting you to stay and asking you to a special party. Read Pat's email and the notes you have made. Then write an email to Pat, using all your notes.

• These days, using chemicals in food production and preservation is increasing. Do the disadvantages of using chemicals in food outweigh the advantages? • Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. • Write at least 250 words.