Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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With

the advancement in technology, social media platforms are becoming an

indespensable

not to be dispensed with; essential

indispensable

part of a contemporary society. People prefer socialising through these platforms than meeting in person.

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is both a boon and a bane situation that will be discussed in

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essay. On one hand, the growth of various social media has

affecting

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affected

the lifestyle of

inviduals

a human being

individuals

. It

is become

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has become

is becoming

becomes

part and parcel of life, as the people communicating with their old and new friends through these

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sites

as people all around the world can be found on sites like Facebook, Instagram etc.

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social media is fast and cheaper for socialising without travelling to place to meet people.

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this

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revolution has adverse effects too.

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, due to just online chatting majorly through messages, people

lack

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lacks

confidence in talking in public as they are more

confinded

not invading healthy tissue

confined

within their personal space.

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, the bond between people reduced a lot as people

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not often

seldom

meet

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with

each other which resulting in fake relations.

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but not the least, the people

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have started

trusting and dating through social

media which

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media, which

results

sometine

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

in falling in love with

wrong person

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the wrong person

a wrong person

over

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Facebook

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, many people

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are finding

find

have found

are found

compatible guys for

them but

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them, but

later on they cheated upon them and it completely devastated them.

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was no happen in

accient

belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire

ancient

time, people met each other and find their a suitable match for them. In conclusion, it is observed that technology has given an ease in

communication but

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communication, but

result in relations are dying out gradually due to lack of face to face interaction, as it is correctly said that facial expression

paly

participate in games or sport

play

crucial role in judging the person.

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Hence these

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Hence, these

should go hand in hand.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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282 words

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