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Some people say that people should have a different amount of holidays according to their job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some
peaole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 are of the opinion that there should be
differerent amount
Suggestion
different amounts
different amount
a different amount
 of holidays according to the type of job done. I strongly agree
witht
expresses the means used
with
 that notion because I believe the demands of various jobs are different
therefore
 requiring different recovery periods.
Firstly
, physical activities carried out in different occupations vary from one another, which means workers may need
different amount
Suggestion
different amounts
a different amount
 of time for rest. For, example, construction workers carry a lot of weight on the job. They would require more vacation than an office secretary.
Furthermore
, some roles are more mentally challenging than others and people in
such
 positions would need more time to recharge so they can be more productive. The degree of mental stress in a role
such
 as project manager would be more than that for a document controller role. In conclusion, I agree that different vacation time should be given to people
as a result
 of the amount of physical and mental demands of their job. I believe,
this
 would help in improving productivity of workers.
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