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The graph compres the percentage of international and the percentage of UK students gaining second class degress or better at a major UK university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The bar chart shows the proportion of UK students and international students achieving
second
 class degrees or higher in seven different subjects at a university in the UK. Degree results were generally good for both home and international students, with well over 50
percent gaining
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percent, gaining
 a
second
 class degree or better in all seven subjects except International Law. International students tended to do better than UK students in technology-related subjects.
This
 was particularly true of Information Technology. Whereas over 80 percent of international students gained a good degree in IT, only about half of the UK students did so.Degree results were similar for the two groups in Nursing and Accounting.
In Arts and Social
Suggestion
Arts and Social
 Science-related subjects, UK students tended to do better. The biggest gap in performance was in International Law, where three-quarters of UK students gained a
second
 class degree or better.
In contrast
, fewer than half of the international students attained
this
 level. Overall, the chart suggests that international and UK students had different strengths when studying for degrees in
this
 UK university.
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