Some countries are introducing an additional tax on drinks containing high levels of sugar due to the negative effects of consuming large amounts of sugar on people’s health. Should governments impose extra taxes to discourage people from consuming sugary drinks and prevent negative effects on people’s health or should it be people’s own responsibility?

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a controversy whether government enforce a higher

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kind of food or

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a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community

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take their responsibility. In my opinion, I strongly agree with adding

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a tax

on sweetened drinks is the better

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the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about

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. On the one hand, there are an increasing number of people suffering from health problems in some countries is considered a consequence of

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sugary beverages. High consumption of high

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drinks can lead to weight gain, obesity

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can contribute to heart disease, type 2 diabetes and other chronic diseases. When the government applies

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policy,

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the higher

higher

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will increase the price of

sugar

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drinks. Once the customers have to pay at a high price, they tend to stop buying it.

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, they will prefer drink

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suitable for drinking

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water

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of

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beverages.

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, many people will stay away from unhealthy drinks

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as Coca-cola or Seven-up. It is predicted that people will choose traditional

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drinks, which

contains nutritious elements

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as tea, mineral water or

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all the plant life in a particular region or period

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juice.

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, the government will acquire much money from

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sweetened drinks so that they can improve health services for victims. The clinics will be extended with full essential

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an instrumentality needed for an undertaking or to perform a service

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and staff.

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, the

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research and develop more new effective method to treat diseases.

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, soft drinks and other highly sweetened drinks

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as cordial and fruit drinks generally provide a high number of kilojoules but few nutrients

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as calcium and iron than the others. A rich

sugar

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diet can cause weight gain, tooth decay, concentration problems – even when you are young. From what has been discussed

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, we may draw the conclusion that whenever taxes on

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drinks are high imposed,

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kind of convenient beverages will become less affordable.

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way is highly appreciated to encourage people to

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direct the course; determine the direction of travelling

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to healthier alternatives. It is predictable that the sweetened drinks industry will witness downward trend in near future once taxes are