Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Gender inequality is one of the major concerns in most developing countries.
However
, in today's world men and women are getting equal opportunities in terms of jobs, education and in all other fields. But large sections of
society
still believes that some jobs are more suitable for men as compared to women. I am of the opinion that
this
is the matter to debate in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn. In
this
essay, we will discuss both sides of the coin.
To begin
with, as per the latest data of the Forbes 2019, most companies in Japan prefer women over men, as they found women much more productive than others. Many top most organisations have women as their CEO's
such
as Indra Noyi, CEO of Pepsico and many others upcoming entrepreneurs. Female entrepreneurship has increased from 26% to 36%, according to the USA business magazine.To improve the female contribution in
society
,
Accept space
,
parents should give equal importance to both boys and girls.. Parents as well as teachers who encourage both boys and girls equally are contributing a lot to
this
society
. We have some famous faces who made our country proud in setting high standards for everyone,
for example
, Ekta Kapoor in entertainment, PV Sandhu in badminton, Kalpana Chawla in space science and many others. So, it is wrong to say that some professions are not meant for women. But it is not a trend without drawbacks which will be discussed in
this
paragraph.
Firstly
, women in our country is always underestimated. It is widely held belief that due to other family responsibilities, women have always lacked productivity, as their families stay on top of their priority list. They are time and travel bound which
also
results in less opportunities and experiences.
Secondly
, many organisations believe that women who are extremely talented got married now and
then
and it gets difficult to find their replacements. So, they prefer men more.
Also
, man can work anywhere and at flexible working hours
,
Accept space
,
whereas, there are a lot of restrictions for women.
For example
, women have to take care of their families along with their work schedules.
This
results in poor quality and unproductive work from their ends.It is wrongly said that it is a duty of women to take care of family as men are equally responsible for their family needs and demands. One point worth mentioning here is that in some professions women give more preference than male counterparts,
for example
, teaching
,
Accept space
,
nursing, chef or baker etc. These sections are so women dominated that men in these jobs are not easily accepted by the
society
. It needs to be understood that men and women have different strength and weaknesses and they should not be judged by old societal norms. To sum up, I am of the opinion that it is wrong to give judgements on the basis of gender. Women have more strength and courage than any of the counterparts. They should be given equal opportunities as they are capable to achieve anything until and unless
this
societal norms are not forced on them. Men are equally responsible for their families and children, so they should always give a helping hand to their partners. Together we can achieve anything, alone we can achieve nothing.It is rightly said,"Men can earn butter and bread, women can earn jam for the family".
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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  • In general

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