Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Consuming excessive amount of

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is detrimental to our

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. Owing to

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, arguments have arisen as to whose duty it is to regulate the level of

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consumption.

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some people believe that the obligation lies with the

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, others believe that individuals are responsible for

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individuals need to take their

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seriously, the

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plays a major role. On the one hand, some people believe that the negative effect of excessive

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intake

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impacts more on individuals and as

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, they should be solely responsible for the

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control. High

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is often implicated in several diseases with the majority of the cases involving long-term or life long treatments. For

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reason, people spend a great deal of money on a long term basis and may eventually get their social and mental well-being affected negatively.

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, a recently published study by

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the Mayo clinic

revealed that seventy-five percent of people suffering from depression have background

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-related illnesses. To avoid

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menace, people with

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school of thought believe that individuals should solely reduce their

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.

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, other people are of the opinion that the

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's ability to make effective policies makes them the best party to limit too much

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intake

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. It is their view that the

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can highly tax junk food like ice cream and

burgers which

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burgers, which

contain high levels of refined

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would ultimately increase the cost of fast food and discourage people from patronizing them.

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, the

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can organise awareness programs and regular advertisements highlighting the hazardous effect of excessive

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consumption.

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would go a long way in encouraging food industries to cut down on their

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production.

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, as convincing as the points

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are raised,

I believe that both individuals and the

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are key in reducing the harmful effect of

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intake

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on our

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. The

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's policy making ability is essential and could strengthen the resolve of individuals to limit the amount of

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they take. In conclusion,

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individuals should be wary of the detriments of excessive

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intake

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, the

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's role in term of setting up policies is equally important. Unless both parties work together, our society would face an even greater

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