During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter Remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Shivan, I am writing to express my interest to work in your organization. For my introduction, we met on a flight during our journey from Hyderabad to Delhi
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month. I was seated beside you and during our delightful conversation, you were generous enough to offer me an interview at your restaurant based on my interest in the field of Hotel management. Currently, I am on a job hunt because I have completed my
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Degree in Hotel Management from a renowned university in Delhi
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week. Before my
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, I worked at a reputed restaurant called seasons gaining 3 years of experience, since my expertise is in the assistant manager position, I would like to seek an opportunity to obtain the same designation. During my work, I have contributed my best to the organization I worked with before. I was known for having an exceptional relationship with my colleagues and was awarded " Employee of the
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" twice in the
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two consecutive years of my work. I am confident that my skills and my obtained degree will prove to be an asset to your organisation. My resume has all my details about education and achievements for your
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reference. To proceed
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, kindly send me an email. Yours sincerely, Komal Seeta.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chain of restaurants
  • potential job opportunity
  • relevant experience
  • managerial role
  • customer service
  • qualifications
  • certifications
  • unique skills
  • eagerness
  • admiration
  • resume
  • references
  • face-to-face meeting
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