You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, complain about the problem; propose action for the store to take; request confirmation that this is agreed

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I am writing

this

letter regarding the issue I have been facing with the

phone

which I have bought recently on 5th July 2008 in one of your store located in Malakpet, Hyderabad. It is

Samsung

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a Samsung

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S3 Note

phone

which I got

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apply

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for

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a 30

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% discount

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MRP. Since

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apply

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I was so excited to buy

this

phone

from

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for

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2 years and as soon as the company released the product I bought it out of

curosity

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curiosity

. The same day evening

phone

's battery went low and tried to charge the

phone

unfortunately

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the plug-ins never worked. I tried to fit the charger for 10 minutes

then

later took my friend's charger pin who bought the same

phone

along with me. But no luck. I am afraid

this

is one of the defective

piece

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pieces

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. I tried to know the problem and went to the nearest repair shop just to know what can be the issue

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was, then

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then

I realized

its

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it's

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the defective piece.

In Addition

, I have the bills and guarantee card with me and expecting you to replace the

phone

with a new same model

phone

. I would greatly appreciate you if you

ca n

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can

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help me out with the replacement. I believe

this

time I will check with all the features and the

phone

properly. Kindly revert me with the confirmation email and let me know when is the best possible time to visit your store to exchange my

phone

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The Greeting

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

238 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You recently bought an expensive electronic product from a store, and found that the product does not work properly. Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter, complain about the problem; propose action for the store to take; request confirmation that this is agreed

The Greeting

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