With internet improvements, people can share views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is this a good or a bad thing? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays everyone is interested
on
Suggestion
in
sharing their personal reviews on the internet, whatever they purchased goods
,
Accept space
,
hence
it's benefit to the new buyers in many ways. I will argue sharing views is how it will ultimately benefit to the customer.
Firstly
, Due to
globalization many
Accept comma addition
globalization, many
products
are coming
Suggestion
is coming
to market from different
countires
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
counties
,
Accept space
,
but same time no one saying what is good and bad on the items. In current generation many people are
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
to share their personal view on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
what ever purchased,
therefore
it's automatically reached
to
Suggestion
with
by
public very fast and useful to the customers,
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
they can easily analysis on the brand and purchase if they
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
intercepted
.
Secondly
, most of the reviewers compared same device with different
compaines
an institution created to conduct business
companies
companions
campaigns
henceforth purchaser can easily understand the quality and price.
For Example
As per
latest CNN survey
Suggestion
the latest CNN survey
many
compaines
an institution created to conduct business
companies
campaigns
before launching material to
market they
Accept comma addition
market, they
are doing
analizingthrough
youtube
Suggestion
YouTube
based on the trend upgrading the stock. On
ther
definite article
the
otherhand
Suggestion
other hand
, Mainly due to
this
kind of reviews it's
not benefit
Suggestion
not benefiting
not benefitting
to the consumer because if reviewer given bad feedback most of the people don't like to purchase
hence
the company value will reduce in the market. On the top of that buyers are confusing because in search
enginee
motor that converts thermal energy to mechanical work
engine
engines
many reviews are there for one product,
moreover many
Accept comma addition
moreover, many
of the reviewers don't have proper contact information in online
therefore
we cannot able to trust with the reviews. In conclusion, I have argued that online product reviews are best to purchase
new item
Suggestion
a new item
new items
the new item
because buyer easily
identifiy
recognize as being; establish the identity of someone or something
identify
identifying
identifies
the value of
item
Suggestion
the item
an item
and it's worth to spend
amount
Suggestion
an amount
the amount
amounts
on required product or not and
finally
beneift
financial assistance in time of need
benefit
to
consumer
Suggestion
consumers
the consumer
.
Submitted by chigurupati on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: