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Some film companies spend millions of dollar on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie ? What factors contribute to the success of a movie ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, the film companies allocate a huge amount of money for casting a
movie
 only.
Although
, making a cinema is not as easy as it seems in watching. Rather, it requires a lot of technological effects, and resources.
Firstly
, these days people are more attracted towards the visual effects, embedded in a motion picture
such
 as appearance of endangered animals, invincible human race, deadly advanced war crafts, weapons and many more and these things are provided by the use of different technology.
For instance
, The Jurassic Park, the film is one of the biggest blockbusters of all times, which has used visual effects and
such
 an incredible manner.
Secondly
, apart from the technology, there are many other resources which play crucial role in script play
such
 as costumes of actors, locations where the film is being shot, scenic beauty, vehicles, houses and shooting houses.
For example
, Fast and Furious
movie
, which was liked by almost all young generation and it was only because of the excessive use of hybrid future cars, racing tracks, models and the hotels filmed in it. To reiterate, producing a good
movie
 requires an investment of funds a lot in order to nurture the script of the
movie
.
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