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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

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Dear
Honui
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Honu
, Long time no see! It is my pleasure to get your invitation to visit India, which is
the
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 great country that I really want to have a chance to visit. I suppose to go there
next
 month, and I am sure that it will be a great time for me to learn
your
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about your
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 culture. I
also
 want to prepare a small gift for your family, so I hope that you could give me some
advise
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 which is great for me to have a
well
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 preparation. And please share
me
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 a list of activities
which
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 I will be able to participate.
Moreover
, I have learnt from the web that the rule of clothing in India is very strict, especially for women, so please give me some instructions. And
also
 the food, I want to have many opportunities to try your national cuisines. I am looking forward to seeing you in India
next
 month. Best, Nguyen

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