some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages the disadvantages

#employers #contact #staff #times #holidays #development

It is being argued that most of the companies keep contacting their employees after the core business hours, and even on holidays as well, which in turn result was devastating of their personal space and their respective member's

time

. Though, it's only acceptable for some emergency cases,

however

its not recommended by the governments as well due to various reasons.

Firstly

, by calling for the employees mobile numbers on vacations, employees won't able to spend their

time

satisfactorily.

For instance

, consider the blue-collar worker who went to his wedding for a month, irrespective of their actual need contacting him/her is actually disturbing his valuable and precious

time

Last

year, the times magazine published an article about the employee regulatory act, in which it’s been clearly stated that there are unavoidable punishments for the firms by contacting their workmen whoever on vacation or off for the specific period.

Secondly

, the reason to get off for working environment for a

time

period is to work more proactively and to take care of their respective company projects more efficiently in order to boost their market which in turn result in their shares. Considering calling them, even on the employee sick day it significantly gives a negative effect on the company. Apparently people will lose their serenity and calm nature.

In addition

to that, At times an artisan will be panic suddenly by their management calls and even by their e-mails.

As a result

, it will lead to major mental health issues which will

further

impact potential for their career growth. Consider

last

decade, reports by a local newspaper Almost 30% of people has got the heart attack by attempting the office calls when they are on leave and most of them are related to their financial reasons

such

as employee market shares and their alternative investments. To Conclude that, it's not advised to contact their respective worker while they in their family

time

and long holidays even not to send the personal messages to them.Governments have already in place by certain amendments for the companies. Of course they are failing in execution of those rules. In order to minimize the public death the companies should follow those stringent policies.

Tue Sep 24 2019

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Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

366 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Constant connectivity
Workplace availability
Crisis management
Decision-making
Competitive edge
Prompt response
Flexibility
Autonomy
Remote work
Work-life balance
Stress
Burnout
Personal time
Discontent
Morale
Productivity
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Employee well-being

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some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages the disadvantages

Include an introduction and conclusion

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