The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems. The London
underground
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is the oldest
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, having opened in 1863. It is
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the largest
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, with 394
kilometres
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of route. The
second
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largest
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, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199
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of route.
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, it serves more people per year.
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only
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in terms of size, the Tokyo
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is easily the most used,with 1927 million passengers per year. Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive,
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with 126
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of route, compared to only 11
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and 28
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for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001,
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the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inaugurated
  • route length
  • passenger capacity
  • urban sprawl
  • public transport
  • technological advancements
  • economic contribution
  • industrial growth
  • population density
  • network expansion
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