The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.
The London
underground
is the oldest Change the capitalization
Underground
system
, having opened in 1863. It is also
the largest system
, with 394 kilometres
of route. The second
largest system
, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres
of route. However
, it serves more people per year. While
only third
in terms of size, the Tokyo system
is easily the most used,with 1927 million passengers per year.
Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with126
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with 126
kilometres
of route, compared to only 11 kilometres
and 28 kilometres
for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while
the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.Submitted by chinkiarora0528 on
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