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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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nowadays
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Nowadays
 practical skills are more important than academic qualifications. The most of the industries require practically
knowledged
recognized or made known or admitted
acknowledged
knowledge
 person because to complete the objective of the job, the employee must have practical experience.
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however academic
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However, academic
However academic
 qualification is not completely dispensable one. The jobs like cleaning,
laboring
doing arduous or unpleasant work
labouring
 are not required academic qualifications. Even though jobs like those are not needed academic qualification, they need basic education.
because
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Because
 in industries so many machineries are there, and they have some precautionary notes on their parts, even though we have practical
knowledge
Use synonyms
 we must know how to read those instructions, for that we need some basic educational qualification. At the same time, engineering jobs are needed both practical and academic qualifications.
we
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We
 cannot survive in a corporate environment without writing and speaking skills for that we need some academic education
most
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Most
 of the technical jobs must require practical
knowledge
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 because to accomplish an objective in those jobs we need practical
knowledge
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.
we
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We
 can draw a car and read about cars on
papers but
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papers, but
 we cannot manufacture the car in
papers
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the papers
, for that reason we should have plenty of practical experience.
even
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
 though someone has
fair academic achievement it
Suggestion
a fair academic achievement, it
a fair academic achievement it
 is not enough to do a job, the person must have plenty of real-life experience in the relevant field.
f
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
or that above reasons most of the educational institution includes practical session in their syllabus neither practical
knowledge
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 nor academic education is dispensable In conclusion, both are like kith and keen we cannot separate them even in the future that must be true

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