Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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in their a condition in which everything is regular and unvarying
uniformity
uniformly
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Although
I agree to some extant
with the importance of uniform, I believe that higher professional the point or degree to which something extends
extent
work
are
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is
appereance
.
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
In
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such
case, workers will be easily identify in a
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identified with such a
identify with a such
identified with a such
identified in a such
such
company
. Thus
, will also
rise the respect between the employees and show equalness
between them. Many companies using having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equals
uniqueness
coolness
this
method for their workers, for example
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have
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has
nationalties
workers, and all of them are Suggestion
nationality
nationalities
worn
a T-shirt carrying TQ logo plus ID card. Suggestion
wearing
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company
uniformation
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information
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leads
in
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at
work
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on the quality rather than the concentration of attention or energy on something
focus
employees
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employees'
employee
appearnce
for two reasons. outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
opens
abeyance
Firstly
, high
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higher
qualify
product means higher reputation among the Suggestion
qualifies
competitives
. the contestant you hope to defeat
competitors
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, many organizations theseday
depend mostly on online Suggestion
these days
these day
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an organized body of related information
database
databases
such
as NL app-store
, so there will be no physical contact between their Suggestion
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employe
and consumer.
In my own point view, I think that organizations should be a person or firm that employs workers
employer
employee
employees
highly
qualities in both their Suggestion
highest
high
work
and workers' appearnce
. Taking Amazon as an example for a outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
sustinable
capable of being sustained
sustainable
sucssful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
company
that
is concentrate
on the both aspects.
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concentrates
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having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
work
and acceptal
employees' dress in order to be worthy of acceptance or satisfactory
acceptable
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success
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