Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

A common debate in today's society is

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whether

governments should invest moneys in the arts, building theatres and museums

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organizing events, or not. I am of the opinion that if a country has the economic possibilities it should definitely invest some moneys on the arts. It's a different situation if it's still a developing country without basic services. Art should have a role into the like of everyone and the governments have the duty to make it possible where feasible. Art should be considered a form ongoing education that doesn't finish with school and should be

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considered in investment plans. There is a study that shows how much is it important for the well being of individuals

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from

going to a

concerto

a performance of music by players or singers not involving theatrical staging

concert

once a week improves not only mental

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, but

phisycal

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

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too. A

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more

pratical

concerned with actual use or practice

practical

reason why

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think governments should invest in

arts

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the arts

it's because in doing so they can actually gain back even more moneys.

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is of course in small part thanks to the

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the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money

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of the tickets, but on a larger scale a town with many artistic events attracts more tourists that will enrich the overall economy.

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,

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is true only for developed and rich

coutries

a politically organized body of people under a single government

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. Poorer countries must

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make sure to invest enough in public

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and basic education. Without these two things it would make no sense to invest in

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the arts

, people in bad conditions would not

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would not appreciate it. In conclusion, I think that when

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and education are guaranteed, governments should have as a priority to invest in

arts

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the arts

in order to improve people's lives.