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Many people think history is one of the most important school subjects, whereas other people say subjects like science and technology are more important than history.

#people #history #school #subjects #science #technology
The bar chart illustrates the top ten countries for the
production
 and
consumption
 of
electricity
 in 2014. Overall, China was the most
production
 and
consumption
 of
electricity
 when the USA was the
second
 most of that. Most of the countries in
this
 rank had the
production
 more than the
consumption
, but Germany was an exception. We can see China was the most
production
 and
consumption
 of
electricity
, there were 5,398 and 5,322 respectively. The USA was the
second
 most of
this
, there was a 4,099 for the
production
 and 3,866 for the
consumption
 in
this
 country. While these both countries had the number of
production
 and
consumption
 of
electricity
 a lot, the number of other countries were below than that around three times. Russia was the
third
 in
this
 rank had only 1,057 and 1,038 for the
production
 and
consumption
 respectively. Germany was an only country in the rank in 2004 that had the
consumption
 of
electricity
 more than the
production
. There were 526.6 for the
production
 while 582.5 for the
consumption
.

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