Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

Traffic congestion is an endemic and a major problem in many major cities.
This
essay will be geared towards looking for possible solutions and an end to
this
trauma.
Firstly
, there is n
eed to for government
Suggestion
a need for government
a need to for government
to provide a transport management scheme that will help people move from one location to the other conveniently.
This
can be achieved by providing alternative means of movement.
For example
, Lagos state is the most populous state in Nigeria and part of the measures put in place by the present administration was the provision of big luxury buses to convey people from one point of the state to h
e
male possessive pronoun
his
other under the ‘bus rapid transit’. These buses are quite comfortable and affordable which has helped traffic flow.
Secondly
, o
ther
any of various alternatives; some other
another
mode of transportation like trains, water and air should
also
be developed as w
ell so
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well, so
as to have fewer vehicles on the road.
This
can be achieved through proper investment in
this
sector of the economy. In conclusion, to get
this
sector running and attract foreign i
nvestors there
Accept comma addition
investors, there
is n
eed
Suggestion
the need
a need
for periodic maintenance and inspections of
this
r
esources.
Suggestion
resource
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