Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

The ever increasing population demands the need
gor
appropriate to; intended for
for
various modes of
transportation
with most of them opting for self-driven vehicles in turn result in greater
traffic
congestion especially, in bigger cities. The paragraphs below will discuss about few measures with which we can reduce the
traffic
problem in major cities.
Firstly
,
government
Suggestion
the government
must encourage citizens to travel by public
tramsportation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
instead
of using own vehicles. Usage of own vehicle should only be
allowded
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
allowed
in certain cases. Cities like
Newyork
Suggestion
New York
New york
, Tokyo and Mumbai are the victims of
this
increasing
traffic
. Offices and companies should strictly prohibit employees to use own
transportation
.
Although
, not every
indivial
a human being
individual
will adhere to the
law there
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law, there
will be a significant reduction in case of
traffic
problems.
Furthermore
, improve the
transportation
infrastructure. Built and expand the road and rail transportations. Built more lanes for vehicles to travel and
also
ensure their proper
maintanance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
. Introduce more effective
traffic
rules and regulations which will reduce accidents. Improve the railways by introducing more trains which
covers
Suggestion
cover
larger distances in
short period
Suggestion
a short period
short periods
of time like bullet trains of Japan.
Finally
, give an awareness about the
traffic
problems that we face in big cities when individuals receive their driver's license from the RTO.
This
will awaken a personal sense of responsibility in citizens Obviously, nothing is going to change overnight.
Still why
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Still, why
dont
do not
don't
we give it a try? It takes time, effort and energy
to witness
Suggestion
witness
such
a major change happening in the big cities of our country. It is the collective responsibility of each citizen to ensure and abide by the
traffic
rules and regulations
outlayed
showing clearly the outline or profile or boundary
outlined
by each country. Depend more on public
transportation
this
will contribute to the greatest cut-down of
traffic
congestion.

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