Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that entertainers

such

as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money and I

also

feel

that is

true. I totally agree with

this

thought. Let's discuss in details. In today's world, we can categorise these entertainers are the highest earners in the

society

. Their earning is much higher than most of the people.

This

difference

also

leads to the making of more poor people within the

society

. I will describe in my view why these high salaries are unfair.

Firstly

, entertainers are

also

doing their job as other people in the world. Each and every individual in the workforce

are giving

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are given

some support to make the national income in a country.

Therefore it

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Therefore, it

is unfair to pay very big salaries to fewer people.

Furthermore

, payments should be done according to the job type, not considering the popularity.

Secondly

, these people earn much higher than well-educated ones in the

society

like doctors, engineers, accountants etc. It is not the best practise knowledge and wisdom are less valued here.

This

will definitely discourage young people to be professionals.

Thirdly

, paying very high salaries to the film stars, sports stars or musicians makes an unfair situation to the poor people who are working very hard to make ends meet. Most of the government servants might not get good wages as the government cannot arrange the money since entertainers are highly paid. We should not forget that these

payment

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payments

made by the government

from

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for

everyone's money. To sum up I

also

feel that entertainers are highly paid and I think these payment systems should be

done an intelligent

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done in an intelligent

and fairly way than

this

. I think salary scales must be designed very fairly than present. Wages

might be plan

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might plan

considering various measures

such

as how hard is the job, educational level, profession.

Moreover professionals

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Moreover, professionals

like doctors, engineers, accountants, lecturers should be highly paid

since

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for

it encourages

society

to be educated. But it is

also

should be at a balanced level.