Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

It is often believed that entertainment celebrities are exorbitantly paid.

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note other occupations that should be paid

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salaries. Music, movie and sports icons are known for their high pay cheques.

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is due to the wide acceptance and the willingness of the populace to pay any amount to watch their performance.

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, the popular Nigerian artist, Davido, earns an annual income of $3 billion, a sum at par with a nation’s budget yet he contributes little or nothing to the

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. It is my belief that artists’ big pay does not commensurate with their contribution to the

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.

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, there are other salient employments that

positively contributes

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positively contribute

to the development of the

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the person or persons that; the one that

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are poorly remunerated. Examples of

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professions are doctors and teachers who dedicate themselves to providing services to the

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. They spend countless efforts to ensure health support and individuals’s nurturing. For these reasons, they should be equitably rewarded as their contribution outweighs those of the stars. In conclusion,

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essay has demonstrated that the entertainment gurus are highly paid

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in contrary to the amount of effort used in their work. Whereas, other jobs like doctors and teachers put in greater efforts yet they are poorly paid.

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position should be corrected for a better

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and reward system.