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More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, others think this will bring stress to the home. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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 hand, those who advocate that working from
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 is useful for the workers and families feel that it gives them the flexibility to
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 as per their convenience.
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 is because when they are not going to the job they need not follow the usual office hours.
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, they choose to
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 at a
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 when their productivity is the highest.
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, by not going to office, they save travelling
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time which
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 on their assignments and finish them early so that they can spend more
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 with their family members.
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, for many reasons, I believe that
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 option leads to more tension in the family life.
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, there is no limit to how long
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 absence of rules at
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 usually leads to people working longer than normal routine, which is
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 of the prime reasons for domestic fights.
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, people miss important informal communication that happens over tea in the office.
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, they may not get to hear about new vacancies that have arisen in the workplace.
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 can result in frustration and they might take
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 out on their family members. To conclude,
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 working from
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 provides
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 with the convenience of working at any
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 and the opportunity to spend more
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 with family I believe it can lead to tense situations at
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 because of lack of set rules and the chance to socialize with co-workers. Do you have an essay on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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