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The table shows different age group with different sector jobs in the uk.

The table shows different age group with different sector jobs in the uk.
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The table represents the data about how many
people
 in different
age
 groups
working
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worked
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 in job sectors in the UK between 1998 and 2006.
Overall
, the highest
number
 of
people
 worked in the technology field,
while
 only a few
people
involved
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were involved
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 in that
sector
 in 1998. Now, turning to the details, in the hotel and catering, most of the
workers
 used to be much younger in 1998, and they were under 26 calculated 25 & 64. In 2006, the majority of
workers
 were under 46, counted
21,303
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as 21,303
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.
While
 only 7544
people
 over 46 used to be worked in hotel and catering service.
Similarly
, the majority of
workers
 were junior in the building
sector
, they were counted
112,565
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at 112,565
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 in 1998,
while
 the
number
 decreased dramatically in 2006. In every
age
, the
number
 of
people
worked
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working
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 in
the
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apply
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building and construction in 1998, decreased in 2006. It can be seen that technology was the popular job
sector
 among the
age
 group 26-35. In 1998, 63889
people
 would work in technology,
while
 the amount rose significantly
at
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to
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 454,375 in 2006, and
this
 was the
sector
 where the highest
number
 of
workers
involved
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was involved
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 in comparison to other sectors. In 1998, the almost same
number
 of
people
 chose to work in the education
sector
 in
36
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the 36
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-45 and 46-56
age
 groups, and there was not that significant change in 2006.
Although
,
people
used
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who used
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 to like to work in education who were over 56.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, age, number, sector, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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