Some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is no doubt subject like

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have

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a vital role

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life. Some people believe that

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than

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, but in my opine if

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a major subject. Apparently, these days technology

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advancements

is on its boom.

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is why academic institutes focus more on

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related subjects in

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student

curriculums from beginning rather

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giving them knowledge of pa0st. My daughter who is studying in 5th standard is learning about artificial intelligence in her school computer program. What I think

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her today as

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these technologies like AI and automation are hot-topics in scientific and engineering world. If

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school will not provide knowledge of ongoing technologies

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they would not be able to compete in their professional life.

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, subjects like

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teaches about the achievements and failures of mankind.

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is important for everyone to know how we reached where we are

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and how to proceed

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by learning from earlier success and failed attempts.A very good example of

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is our space exploration success, After many failed attempts and losses and learning from them,

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human is able to reach on other plants in

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the solar system

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, if we ignore our past and don’t accept

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it, we

would not be able to make our present and future a better place. In conclusion, As both

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and

history

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are necessary field of study as one helps to make better future other

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teaches us our mistakes.

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, according to me

history

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is as important as

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and other its related subjects.

Fri Oct 18 2019

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