2 year ago, Samsung declared that their repair service can be provided in the every corner of India. They choose to deliver this news by story telling on social media. Thus, they make the following video and posted it on YOUTUBE.

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Samsung is

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

known for android phone,

however

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also

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manufactures TVs, tablets,

smartwatches

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smart watches

, virtual reality headsets, home

theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

and audio, desktop computers, laptops, monitors, printers, memory devices, home appliances and security/monitoring systems. With

this

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wide range of products sold all over India and worldwide, they have to provide

repair

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service

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Hence

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, they start providing

repair

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service

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all over the India even if it hills area, villages or any other area. Providing a

repair

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facility by a company in every corner of

country

Suggestion

the country

is a great achievement,

although

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company

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companies

the company

have to advertise it, so people should know about

this

Linking Words

service

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. Samsung came up with

idea

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the idea

an idea

of telling a unique

story

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which just so heart melting and emotional. To make it more emotional they choose

orphanage

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as their clients and that

orphanage

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include children with disabilities and

twist

Suggestion

a twist

the twist

at the end. About the

story

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Accept space

In the

story

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, someone call to Samsung customer care about the problem they were facing with Samsung tv and they were requesting to fix it before evening because of some particular reason.

Through

Suggestion

Though

that was a hill region, technician reached there and fixed the tv just few minutes before they want to.

Linking Words

then

Suggestion

Then

that lady rings a bell and call children

to come

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come

over. At that

time audience

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time, audience

realize

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realized

that

place

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the place

was actually an

orphanage

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with disable children and everyone was waiting for a singing show because one girl from that

orphanage

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went to that show for singing competition and they all want to

listen

perceive (sound) via the auditory sense

hear

her performance. Samsung tried to show that their

service

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and products will never let you down. Impact

Accept space

After

this

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story

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came out in market Samsung just hit the India digital market because electronic device somehow need

repair

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at a certain time in life and Samsung became the

first

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origination that provide

repair

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customer

service

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in every part of

country

Suggestion

the country

. It shows the major impact when people found an emotional attachment with

this

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story

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. User targeted

–

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Samsung targeted each and every person that

own

Suggestion

owns

a Samsung product in any region of

nation

Suggestion

the nation

nations

because they know that electronic device get disturbed even with small mis happenings.

Sun Oct 20 2019

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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355 words

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2 year ago, Samsung declared that their repair service can be provided in the every corner of India. They choose to deliver this news by story telling on social media. Thus, they make the following video and posted it on YOUTUBE.

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People should plan for their retirement by saving money. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The world’s air pollution levels are rising year on year. What are the most pressing causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantage?

Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

.You have joined a new job recently. Write to your friend about your new job. In your letter •describe the reason for quitting the previous job •show your excitement for a new job and other details •say about your salary package